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DailyUXWriting
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Scenario: A user is in their favorite supermarket. They open the supermarket’s app on their phone to see what’s on sale and are greeted by a promotion.
Challenge: Write a promotional home screen for a subscription service that delivers groceries to the user once-a-month for a flat fee.
Headline: 45 characters max
Body: 175 characters max
Button(s): 25 characters max
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Headline:
Groceries Delivered MonthlyBody:
Skip the store! Enjoy fresh groceries delivered monthly for just [price]. Save time and money with our flat-fee subscription!Buttons:
View DetailsDismiss message forever
Why I chose this?
- Short
- Clear
- Option is not open for users since it is a popup
- Concise
5. Shows Urgency
Conclusion
The final promotional copy strikes a perfect balance of clarity, brevity, and user engagement. The headline captures the offer’s value in under 45 characters, while the body text concisely highlights the benefits of time savings, convenience, and simplicity within the 175-character limit. The call-to-action buttons—"View Details" and "Dismiss forever"—respect user choice, encouraging exploration while maintaining transparency and urgency. This approach ensures the message is short, clear, and actionable, creating an effective and user-friendly promotional experience.
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